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Everything Ends. Pt.1

January 27, 2010
By MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse


Whatever shall I do,
when I see you.
Smirk and all.
Is there such a thing as pain?
Perhaps it's just an illusion,
Like our love?
But if my soul is damned;
Forget the tears,
If everything ends.

How could my eyes be shielded by beauty,
demonds surround the memories.
A dark pit of deathly essence,
covers over me.
This is real;
You are in your own fantasy.
But who am I to cast the first stone?
If everything ends.

You are too late.
Why do I still love your scent?
It pains me to hear the soft, silken voice.
I still remember the day,
engraved like ink on bones,
but since everything ends...



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on Jun. 1 2010 at 10:25 am
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

:)      

on May. 30 2010 at 10:57 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

thats what they want you to think (wink,wink).....

on May. 30 2010 at 8:51 am
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

oh thank you. :) i don't think it's possible to email tomatoes lol

on May. 27 2010 at 8:38 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

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Get, Got, Gotten.

I like this captain. you sound really deep in thought like you cant make up your mind on whether or not you like this guy. 5 stars captain. i bet you like that. maybe i could email you some tomatoes....

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:49 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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I commented on ur Hatrid On Life.

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:43 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

ok then!!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:42 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Ive only read this 1 n the other 1 ive commented on. ill check them out!!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:40 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Thank you! I appreciate it so much, have you checked out my other writings? I'm not so sure if they're better or worse than the ones you have read so far

on Feb. 10 2010 at 6:38 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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:-D totally. And its no problem. I really admire ur writing style!!

on Feb. 10 2010 at 5:47 pm
MarinaOreo GOLD, King Of Prussia, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your soul is the whole world" -Siddhartha by Hermann Hesse

Yeah I agree with the whole rhyming thing, sometimes I think it can make it too cliche. But thanks so much! :)

on Feb. 9 2010 at 10:26 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Hey!! Great poem!! Like, REALLY awesome. I hate it when people think that they need to ryme to create a good poem. I mean, as long as you're writing, write whatever you want!!!! Lik this poem. This is a great poem, and the imagery is amazing. I luv the idea, too. Very mysterious. WOW WOW. Congrats.


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