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If Only

January 23, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


If only I didn't get lost in your eyes, then fall in love with your smile, Why do we have so much in common? I guess that's just our style

If only you weren't so funny, If only you weren't so smart, If only we hadn't met, So you wouldn't steal my heart

To you I'm just a girl, If only you would see, That if we took a chance, How perfect we would be

Years from now we'll try it
Then you'll hold me close, A love to last forever, With the boy I chose

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was crushing on a guy. I thought we were absolutely perfect for each other.

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on Oct. 18 2011 at 12:07 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanx for the support:)

on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:44 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
22 articles 5 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either an adventure...or nothing" -Helen Keller

dear supernova7,

this poem is amazing.

your writing is amazing.

please never stop.(:

thats all...

sincerly me (:


on Sep. 28 2010 at 11:13 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks:)                                             

on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:42 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
20 articles 9 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unexamined life is not worth living." ~Socrates

awww i love this! ive felt this way too <3 it's such an awesome feeling and daydream- you portray it extremely well and make it sound so sweet :)

on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:48 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

aw thank you:)

on Sep. 4 2010 at 11:36 am
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

you spaced out your lined perfectly and it rhymed great. so i guess i'm trying to say that I LOVED IT! !!!!!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:33 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thanx Dreamer:)

on Jul. 31 2010 at 12:33 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 431 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

I like how different this poem is from the ones you usually write, but it still turned out totally great.
It's a very sweet, cute poem and I love it! :DD

on Jul. 17 2010 at 2:46 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thanks for commenting:)

on Jun. 29 2010 at 6:40 pm
mwahxandxmwa SILVER, Melbourne, Other
6 articles 0 photos 135 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Silence is golden...duct tape is silver" - a random T-shirt

I love this as a contrast to some of your poems. This is about a heart stolen where as some others are about a heart crushed.

I think you are amazing and I am slightly envious of your rythm.

Thankyou :D


on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:08 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on Jun. 21 2010 at 11:02 am
mary.brodeur BRONZE, Westerly, Rhode Island
3 articles 34 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cause sometimes you just need to throw yourself a party."

I love all your poems...your really talented!

on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:24 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)

on May. 25 2010 at 12:02 pm
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

great poem! u write alot about love, and are very good at it!

on May. 20 2010 at 10:31 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thanks:)                       

on May. 20 2010 at 10:26 pm
DanielleZ DIAMOND, Rochester Hills, Michigan
83 articles 16 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you like and like what you do.

This is sweet.  I like how the rhyme flows.