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A special world

January 25, 2010
By Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
Alisha62293 BRONZE, Warwick, Rhode Island
2 articles 1 photo 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man who dares to waste one hour of time has not discovered the value of life." Charles Darwin


A special world for you and me,
a special bond one cannot see.
It wraps us up in its cacoon,
and holds us fiercely in it's womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold.
Gently nestling us to the fold.
Like silken thread, it holds us fast.
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break,
a new one forms in it's wake.
To bind us closer, and keep us strong.
In a specuak world where we belong.


The author's comments:
My aunt was facing many relationship problems, and she has always liked my writing. She said it helped her cope with everything she was going through. Her boyfriend recently broke up with her and I wanted to write something to let her know that I am here for her, and that better days will soon come.

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on Jun. 3 2010 at 10:36 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

I LOVED THIS! It's so sweet and beautiful! You are a great writer! If you get a chance can you check out my work and rate them and tell me wat you think? Thanks <3

on Apr. 13 2010 at 2:25 pm
Emiliegh BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We all die. The goal isn't to live forever, the goal is to create something that will.” - Chuck Palahniuk

I really like the rhythm in this poem; it flows from the mouth. Great work.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 11:31 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx