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January 18, 2010
By LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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So many thoughts.
Confused
Hurt.
Pain.
My heart bleeds at the thought of you.
Pools of blood
And my last nerve breaking.
Heat boiling in my blood.
My fists clenching,
Unclenching.
One slap across the face wouldn’t hurt.
After all,
You broke my heart.

© Ashley T., Westport, MA

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This article has 9 comments.

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2012 at 5:09 pm
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
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&quot;Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken&quot;<br /> -Taylor Swift

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I love it<3333
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2010 at 6:10 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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thanks much! :)
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 8:28 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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I love this, it shows emotion, and reveals truth. 5 Stars :-)
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on May. 12 2010 at 3:53 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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thanks for the feedback!! :)
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on May. 12 2010 at 3:52 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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awh. :) well thank you!!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:30 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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I like this piece. Its not just 'eh'!!!!!
k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 6:32 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Oh, okay now i get it :) Very good and i like it even more :) <3
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 11 2010 at 5:22 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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heart bleeds=pools of blood. thats alot of bleeding-I like it too.
k.james SILVER said...
on May. 11 2010 at 5:15 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
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Liked it, but didn't understand what "pools of blood" had to do with someone breaking your heart :S