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There Was a Hole Here

January 11, 2010
By Bureiku GOLD, Spring, Texas
Bureiku GOLD, Spring, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Has no one told you I'm not breathing?

There was a wall
It was just a wall
A wall
Made of bricks
At least I think it was bricks
I’m not entirely sure
But that doesn’t really matter
It just struck me as odd
Because it didn’t always used to look like that
Oh no, no no
Now it’s perfect
There isn’t anything wrong with it
It isn’t unique anymore
It’s boring now
I wish I had my wall back
There was a hole here
It’s gone now

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on Oct. 17 2010 at 8:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

I like how it sounds not like a poem but like you're talking and obsessing over your stupid wall.  i like how the ending starts over again-if thats what its doing. very nice captain. do your dance.