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a sweet lie

December 16, 2009
By Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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he looks into my hazel eyes
my auburn hair drifting through the wind of lies
we walk together hand in hand
his red lips so luscious call for me
but is this real? my angel asks me
but its too late
and i reach in
not thinking of the hate
he will soon bring
my careless self falls into his black hole
the endless questions that i hold
will never be answered

he holds my neck and brings me in further
i fall for it
how stupid could i be
but soon those tears will come for me
the pleasure brings me things i've never known
the desire fools me and so does he.

how long will it be
till' i find that he has been
cheating
on
ME?

© Alexi B., Coral Springs, FL

The author's comments:
this piece came from personal experiences. I loved my boyfriend but turned out he was cheating on me this whole time.
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Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:24 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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thanks so much :)
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:11 pm
RebeccaJoy DIAMOND, Springville, New York
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&quot;Sometimes it&#039;s kinda fun to do the impossible.&quot; -Walt Disney<br /> &quot;Go live your dream&quot;-Disney&#039;s Tangled

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great job. i can relate. good job
-raining-grace- BRONZE said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 5:42 pm
-raining-grace- BRONZE, Allisaw, Alaska
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-Live Laugh Love- <br /> Its the only way to survive this life.

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i will do that absolutly
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Feb. 10 2010 at 9:10 am
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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hi... could you please read my other stories?????? i really need some feedback!
Lost-In-Life GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 4:40 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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It&#039;s never to late, if it weren&#039;t for the last minute many things would never get done!

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Wonderful poem. It's relatable, well written, and just all over great! Off to read more of your work now.
-raining-grace- BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 2:04 am
-raining-grace- BRONZE, Allisaw, Alaska
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-Live Laugh Love- <br /> Its the only way to survive this life.

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i am so sorry to hear about your boyfried. but this was a truely amazing poem tha i can relate to!