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I Love You Babe

November 16, 2009
By Love_Baby SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
Love_Baby SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
"True love waits."
"If it made you smile never regret it."
"Not everyone's a supermodel."


My head spins
and my thoughts scatter.
My eyes sparkle
and my heart beat strengthens.
My pulse quickens
and my lips twitch into a smile.
Goosebumps rise
and electricity bolts through my body.
A giggle escapes my lips
and my stomach fills with butterflies.
And all you did is say the simple words,
“I love you babe.”


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I first started dating my current boyfriend.

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on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:30 pm
Love_Baby SILVER, Wyoming, Michigan
5 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill you makes you stronger."
"True love waits."
"If it made you smile never regret it."
"Not everyone's a supermodel."

Thank you, so much. I really appreciate the comments.

on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:15 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Aww, that's so sweet (: You wrote about such typical things that people experience when in love in a simple, easy-flowing way. Pretty good (: Keep writing!