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My Thunderstorm
November 10, 2009
The rain washes away my tears
I smile at the purple velvet skies
that are streaked with lightning
The rumbling thunder sounds like laughter
Is it laughing at me?
The sky cries with me,
It's own warm tears drenching me
I lay back in the grass, close my eyes and breath in the smell
This is my Thunderstorm
The violent winds whip my hair into my face
I smile and lay there while the sky darkens
There is no rainbow to be found here
But this is my rainbow
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This article has 29 comments.
chelliex65 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:01 pm
Aww, I liked this. You're a really good writer. :)
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:22 pm
thank in you!!! =)
TemptedFiction said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 8:16 pm
Ohmgeee Fredddd :)
This poem is really good. I like how you took something that most people dont like, and mad it into your own. Your thunderstorm. Really good job :D
This poem is really good. I like how you took something that most people dont like, and mad it into your own. Your thunderstorm. Really good job :D
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 6:55 pm
*dances too* THANKS!!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 6:52 pm
i love this freddio! :D it's amazing. *dances* go fred go fred. lol.
Fredwardness SILVER said...
on Nov. 27 2009 at 6:56 pm
yea you can callme freddi, and i will look at your work =)
writerscramp PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2009 at 1:41 pm
Aw, freddi! (is it ok that i call you that?) i honestly think this is my fav i've read for a while! (hence the reason why i presssed 'fav')
please read some of mine, your feedback would mean a lot!
please read some of mine, your feedback would mean a lot!
Fredwardness said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 12:16 pm
oops the last line is supposed to be
But this is my thunderstorm
But this is my thunderstorm
