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In Love with the Fantasy
October 22, 2009
In love with the Fantasy
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you
I am often believed to have charm
Yet I feel I will bring harm
It feels very delusional
And the pain is so emotional
In this world I have created
The name of my love has been stated
Her rich happiness and purity
I believe was not tainted by society
Her very life is different from mine
Her personality has given the sign
I know now it cannot be
But I am still in love with the Fantasy.
© Steve S., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 9 comments.
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 6:27 am
I liked the title and how its repeated in the last line.
I think this is a beautiful poem. :)
I think this is a beautiful poem. :)
riotgirl1134 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 7:41 pm
You have incredible talent. That was absolutely beautiful.
ariwrites94 GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 10:15 am
wonderful poem! i have surely felt this way before. plz comment and rate my poem "Sensitive Am I." thankx! and once again great job!!!
cassandra_2011 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 10:04 pm
Hey this is great! I think it would be good to add a few more punctuations like commas, it was hard to follow without them and maybe change it to just "I'm in love with fantasy"? I think people would still understand and it would flow better. It's definitely a great work though. I love the overall story as it created a picture in the reader's head. Great job!
"In love with the Fantasy
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you" - that's so beautifully tragic and hopeless yet a relief at knowing the truth. I love how you phrased that verse. It's ironic that on the surface the poem is about Fantasy, but if you peel back the layers it's about Reality. Cool poem.
Is something I will forever be
And I mask what is very true
Feeling I may never be with you" - that's so beautifully tragic and hopeless yet a relief at knowing the truth. I love how you phrased that verse. It's ironic that on the surface the poem is about Fantasy, but if you peel back the layers it's about Reality. Cool poem.
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:11 am
I love the emotion and felling that you have added to this peice. writings like this are ones that I can really tell come from personal experiences.
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