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Pyramid of Broken Hearts.

October 10, 2009
By cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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It’s been around,
Longer than those other pyramids.
It grows every second,
Adding pieces of hearts.

We women,
Fall for you men,
Then receive a broken heart,
That heart,
Is placed on top.

The Pyramid of Broken Hearts,
Is bigger than life itself,
It is the one thing,
Every girl has in common.


The author's comments:
I was doodleiing on my algebra notes (maybe thats why im making a B in that class...) and i was drawing random hearts. Then without even thinking i looked down and i had made a pyramid. Inspiration flodded my body and i made a note to write a poem. Hope yall enjoy!!

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on Oct. 19 2009 at 8:39 pm
cheyenneduhon PLATINUM, Lumberton, Texas
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Thanks for the cmpliments & support!!

on Oct. 19 2009 at 8:35 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

I liked it! :) My broken hearts have been added to that pyramid! keep writing! you will make a wonderful poet! :)