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Whisper in my ear

October 7, 2009
By AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
8 articles 17 photos 69 comments

Beat in my heart
~ like summer thunder
~ like pouring rain
Rush through my veins
~ like water in a river
~ like wind through the grass
Tangle in my hair
~ like the harsh winter wind
~ like a dream that gives me hope
Slip through my fingers
~ like the hours in a day
~ like the passing of a friend
Dance before my eyes
~ like lightening in the sky
~ like waves on the water

Whisper in my ear....

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on Oct. 25 2009 at 11:04 am
---Sixx--- PLATINUM, /, Other
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Favorite Quote:
\"To see what a man is like, take a look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.\"

this is great! the sensory language really helps me SEE what you are writing about. awesome work!

greg9381 GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 1:37 pm
greg9381 GOLD, Atlanta, Georgia
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i love it!!

on Oct. 17 2009 at 9:07 am
this is great Amelia!!