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September 28, 2009
By JessB46 SILVER, Lake Placid, New York
JessB46 SILVER, Lake Placid, New York
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blue, bright
bubbling, breezing, melting.
moronically it will fall
if they could only, simply
spin sdrawkcab a few years

or so
pond lilies wouldn’t frown
at the color of august

(so much)
and the winds wouldn’t
in their consummate and consequential way
that skin shiver as
dream water turns to
honey- dripping pouring gooping-
in morning slow mouths
while the morning birds are
outside singing
and the morning bees are
pushing eyelids down

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on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:25 am
fantastical! this is great, you are an awesome writer. rock on!

on Oct. 9 2009 at 11:09 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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