Who Cares?

September 26, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


I feel as though my world is crashing down,

My heart has been shattered to the ground.

Can anyone see the pain in my eyes?

Does anyone care that my life is a lie?



Where is a friend, someone who bears?

My pain and sorrows my joy and cares?

I need to find peace and love that’s for sure,

And all that I need, is just one open door.



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on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:36 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
12 articles 0 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

Great poem! Don't feel discouraged, you're not the only one out there that feels that way, but trust me, it will get better if you don't let it get the better of you. Instead, keep using your emotions to write things like this - writing actually works really well. ^_^

on Aug. 18 2010 at 12:31 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

This is soo great... per the norm! great job!

on Jul. 3 2010 at 1:09 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

your welocom girl keep it up

on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:24 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Hey Ashley! Thanks sooo much for commenting on a lot of my work!! It means so much to me! :) I will be sure to take a look at your work! Thanks SO MUCH again! :)

Monica


on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:49 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

wow love it i fell this way a lot

 

you may have noticed i post a lot of comits i fell like pepol need to know when thay r aprecated


on Jun. 9 2010 at 9:25 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

even though it was just a vented poem, the true feelings often come out of one when they vent.  the writer might not even know that they feel that way, but the poem tells otherwise, for you cant write about something that you havent felt and have it come out that well, just a thought to keep in mind!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 6:46 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

i love this poem, it describes the feeling of being alone at its most extreme, or as close to it as anyone will get.  it also tells me that there is someone else in this world that lnows exaclty how i once felt, not all that long ago.  five out of five, great job, keep it up.

 


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on Mar. 25 2010 at 9:58 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
1 article 5 photos 300 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

How I've always gone through life is invisible. I've felt this poem very often. When youre invisible, you feel alone.

Y. said...
on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:02 pm
Awww, thank you so much!!! :)

on Mar. 4 2010 at 12:46 pm
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

I love how you can relate to this, and put the reader in their own situation. It's really amazing! Definitely keep writing, you're amazing at it.

on Feb. 27 2010 at 3:11 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

Thank you so much!!!

on Feb. 3 2010 at 9:16 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

i completely agree with browneyes. u r very talented!!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 5:11 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
24 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

I feel this way too a lot at times. That's whats so great about being a writer; we get to vent out our hearts and souls, and by the time we are done scribbling down how bad we feel, we look up, and think, "Wait. What was I upset about?"

haha. I love it when that happens. :)

keep on writing! you're amazing, I swear.

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:45 pm
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"

I want to let everyone know that this was just a poem I wrote when I was mad. I don't feel like this either, just had to vent. Please Please comment!!!!! :)




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