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All we can do

September 20, 2009
By Ren-P. PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Ren-P. PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
21 articles 18 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You must give up a life you’d planned in order to have the life that’s waiting for you." ~ Joseph Campbell


Being spontaneous,
Falling in love,
Risking pain,
Risking it all.

Sometimes the best thins hurt the worst,
And all we can do is live to love again.



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Girl-Writer said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 10:56 pm

*laughs quietly*

It's still a very good - and as Mimi pointed out - deep poem with the meaning skimming the surface. Spelling mistakes can be worried about by the editors. Keep up the good work.


on Nov. 29 2009 at 8:37 pm
Ren-P. PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
21 articles 18 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You must give up a life you’d planned in order to have the life that’s waiting for you." ~ Joseph Campbell

Thanks Mimi!

(Wow. I just noticed that I forgot the "g" in the word "things." Sigh).

mimi2.0 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 5:31 pm
mimi2.0 BRONZE, Fremont, California
4 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you really want it, then you gotta try for it. IF your hyped, the put it on the field"
"Marching band not only shows my love for music, it shows my love for everything around me."

wow. its short yet states a deep point. i like it alot.

~mimi