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Poem: {It's alright}

May 11, 2023
By Anonymous

I'm holding onto your scrawny wrists,
As I look into your tired eyes,
not a single thought behind them

Your porcelain skin
a mere canvas for you to draw,
You're painting each of your worries away

Oh dear,
I know


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on Jun. 3 2023 at 12:30 pm
HenryBillinghurst GOLD, Breckenridge, Colorado
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Simply eloquent, @YourLocalArea51Alien ! Your poeticism shines very truly here, and I admire how the fractures and metaphors of description put together this feeling of empathy. The flow in which you write, wherein a person of fatigue and another of empathy connect, feels very true to an ethereal, literary style. I also love the part about "porcelain skin." I'm imagining a somewhat darker meaning in that stanza, and if so, well done, because it is so pertinent and so delicately displayed.