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Water deep and blue

December 13, 2022
By pixelcel BRONZE, Farmington, Missouri
pixelcel BRONZE, Farmington, Missouri
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Water

Soundless and unbroken

Down I go, into the depth of the sea

Water deep and blue,

Never-ending,never-seeing, never-stoping 

I push up but am stuck going down, down, down

Water my greatest enemy,

My foe and friend,

Never-ending, never-seeing, never-stoping,

Slowly the water takes my last breath

Soundless and unbroken 

Water deep and blue, 

I am forever stuck in you.


The author's comments:

This piece showcases what it is to feel like you are drowning although you know how to swim. Even when you try to go up for air, you are still stuck in the water without help from anyone. It shows how lonely and helpless someone can be in the deep ocean. 


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