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Love You

December 6, 2022
By Anonymous

“Love you” (2)

Two small words (3)

Quiet and calm (4)

So smooth and sacred (5)

It unfolds off your tongue (6)

Twists your stomach into knots (7)

Like a rock-hard pretzel (6)

Thoughts engulf your brain (5)


What did I do? (4)


I screwed up. (3)


Oh no. (2)

 

“I love you” (3)

Now, see the change? (4)

Much more meaningful (5)

Thoughts avalanche your brain (6)

Caterpillars turn into  (7)

Moths that flutter around inside  (8)

You are almost too caught up (7)


Practically forget (6)


To express it back (5)


“I love you too” (4)


The author's comments:

This is free verse poetry each stanza increases by one syllable and then decreases by one syllable. It is about the difference in how people feel when someone says love you rather than I love you. 


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