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A Constant Loop

February 28, 2022
By elenaramirez19 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
elenaramirez19 BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Rage is a tire swing 

Your emotions swing back and forth

Without knowing the final destination

Rage is like a hole within you

It brings out the worst in you

Like a tire swing, rage can be hurtful.

Realising anger is a constant loop

A loop that ties you in 

As feeling trapped. 

Constantly spinning over careless thoughts 

Thoughts that can be taken by the wind.

At the end you are just left alone

With no sense of closure.


The author's comments:

This piece is being inspired from the feeling ones feel when going through a breakup. Although rage might not be the first emotion but when you detatch yourself from someone you spend time with it is difficult. 


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Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 15 2022 at 6:24 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Nice work!!! Well done getting it on editor's choice...⭐⭐⭐