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Unconditional

February 25, 2022
By skyfikkers05 BRONZE, Bellevue, Nebraska
skyfikkers05 BRONZE, Bellevue, Nebraska
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You are my sweet old friend, 

like a child’s teddy bear. A little smelly 

and scraggly, but nevertheless 

warm and loving. The fur you wear

as white and pure 

as your smile. Forever happy 

and endlessly affectionate, 

just as always. 

You still act like a puppy 

when you roll over, exposing 

your little warm belly. 


The sound of your pitter-patter 

and labored breathing 

let me know you are here 

with me for now. 

Even though I know 

we don’t have forever, 

I will show you 

the same unconditional love 

you have shown me, 

for the rest of your days.


The author's comments:

This piece is about my little grump of a dog. He is my first dog and I got him in 2012 when he was 4 years old and I was 7, so we've grown up together for most of our lives. I feel especially close to him since I'm an only child. He is getting older and I know when he's gone it will destroy me, so I use writing as an outlet to process my feelings in a way.
Thanks for reading :)


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Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 9 2022 at 12:16 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Thus poem is really warming...We could see how much your dog means to your through this beautiful poem...Good work getting it on editor's choice...⭐⭐⭐