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The Feeling of Sadness

February 11, 2022
By JJGuerrero BRONZE, Houston, Texas
JJGuerrero BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Sadness looks like an

old man walking his last 

step on this earth with no one

to leave behind.

 

Sadness smells like

a dying red rose with 

a scent of polution coming

from a big filthy city.

 

Sadness sounds like

whimpers from a beautiful dog

asking for help without anyone listening.

 

Sadness tastes like

your favorite cereal after

waiting the whole day to have it

just to find out there’s no milk.

 

Sadness feels like

a bullet to the chest

with no way to fix or stop

bleeding endlessly for the rest of time.


The author's comments:

14 years old
Houston, Texas
My name is Jonathan, I am currently an 8th grader in Meyerland Performance and Visual Arts Middle School. I was born and raised in this city; I will continue to live and thrive in this city unless my path of a poet or programmer change. I like to play baseball, listen to music, and write my thoughts down. I'm not a relatively smart student but I always make sure to get A's.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Feb. 20 2022 at 12:19 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Nice work getting this on editor's choice...
And high-five, I too am not a relatively smart student but I always make sure to get straight As...✋🏻✋🏻✋🏻