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winter's here

January 14, 2022
By elizabethmccloy BRONZE, Mount Pleasant, Pennsylvania
elizabethmccloy BRONZE, Mount Pleasant, Pennsylvania
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my chest opens

to welcome a taste 

of novel feeling

 

hidden beside weakness

almost too massive for hope

too small for meditation

 

words descend my tongue

meaningless, they

hovered through fog

 

gravity lost its pull 

i float within a multitude 

of frozen winters

too cold to feel something

 

i'm detached from my 

mind, i must have left it

in fall


The author's comments:

Seasonal depression hits me very hard in January. Once the Christmas decorations are taken down and New Year's Eve has passed, I feel emotions really hard. I think this piece can connect with many people, especially teens my age who feel despondent in these winter months. 

I really love this poem because it plays with perspective. Particularly, the last line can be perceived in numerous ways: like the season, or the verb. When the season shifts from autumn to winter, I have felt like gravity has a different pull on me; it's almost like I'm "falling".


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