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Who's the Dog Now?

May 14, 2021
By cat2sing BRONZE, Hockessin, Delaware
cat2sing BRONZE, Hockessin, Delaware
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Grape with a hint of cherry
One day when a dog just licked it all up
Gulping every thought and headache
A smile bloomed on my face
Oh! Look at that silly dog
With a scritch at the fluffy ear
I walk along my merry way

My brain is made of air
Now I have no cares
Entire skull is empty
Silly dog got a sweet treat
Sun shines gently on my head
Smooth strokes as I walk
Air is fresh and cool
Smile so big, I drool


The author's comments:

Catherine has alway enjoyed writing and journaling. Her humorous tone is close to her personality. Her writing is a close look to her inner psyche and how her thoughts dart from topic to topic. This poem grew from a random thought that popped into her head one day as she gazed at her two lovely pups.


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on May. 18 2021 at 10:32 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

thats fun!
try reading the poem how to survive a fairytale.