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Weaker

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Hopes are crushed,

Future is burning.

Holding on to thin rope,

Still learning.

Will I ever find healing,

Or saftey somewhere.

Final stretch,

Go go go says my mind,

Race for the finish line.

Help me save me,

Before I sink,

Beneath the waves.

They say what doesn't kill you,

Makes you stronger,

But I'm weaker everyday.


The author's comments:

This is about the feeling where you feel like the whole world has turned their backs on you and you feel there is nothing you can do reminding people to think about what you say.


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on May. 11 at 7:51 am
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 9 at 1:07 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
103 articles 31 photos 800 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

I can't really think of how to improve this it's so wonderful even now.

on May. 4 at 7:39 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

I really appreciate all the comments, for a while there I thought my poems weren't any good.

on May. 4 at 2:27 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
179 articles 22 photos 969 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"

the poem by its self was really cool, again tho, the sidenote doesn't entirely match up, tho it doesn't feel so out of place. but ur a really good author anyhow.
i would also like to say: if nobody comments on your work for months and months and months, don't let it get to you. but i try, and lydiaq actively does. and she is an awesome person just doesn't know it.