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That Ring

April 30, 2021
By WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf


Feeling lonely and sad,

Wondering why I'm bad.

All I do is cry and shout,

Please let me out.

I'm feeling guilty all the time,

When paranoia and anxiety,

Is my only crime.

Mom loves me shouldn't she?

Yes but sadly she hides behind,

The one she's dating at the time.

Now I'm left with my dad,

But he is far away,

Can't help me when I feel this way.

Call you say but you got it wrong,

Mom won't allow that ring to come.


The author's comments:

This features the hardships of life and how you could be left feeling alone and isolated when you feel that life has no meaning anymore and you are guilty because you take it out on others. 


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on May. 7 at 10:16 am
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thank you!

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 7 at 9:29 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
103 articles 31 photos 800 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

Thanks, I will help!

on May. 7 at 7:31 am
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

@Lydiaq Hey, if it's okay with you could you also work with me on my poems? They're average right now but I want to learn how to make them better and after reading your work (And the fact that you've actually responded but mainly based on your work) I think you're the person I should talk to.

on May. 7 at 7:24 am
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Yeah, I do get a little bad at that but I will definitely work on it, thanks for the advice.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on May. 6 at 6:12 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
103 articles 31 photos 800 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A word is dead
When it is said
Some say.
I say
It just begins to live
That day."
--Emily Dickenson

Hey, I luve your ideas, but maybe u could work on the punctuation and rhyme, especially at the end:}

on May. 4 at 7:37 pm
WolvesRain DIAMOND, Walton, Kentucky
72 articles 0 photos 122 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every secret of a writer's soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works." Virginia Wolf

Thanks again!

on May. 4 at 2:13 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
179 articles 22 photos 969 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)
And the words I say most often: "Where was I?"

wait wait wait. youve been on ti for 4 days and you've gotten 7 things thru? i was on ti for 7 months when I started to get stuff thru and my friends been on even longer and she still hasn't got stuff thru. lucky...
if your actually experiencing this, get help. but aside from that, cool poem