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Goodnight, My Sun

April 12, 2021
By PeytonisSleeping BRONZE, Holly Springs, North Carolina
PeytonisSleeping BRONZE, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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Goodnight, My Sun 


Peyton Brown 

 

I’m his sun

In his lonely atmosphere


He longs for me

As he drifts away  

Asleep 

Asleep 

Forever in his dreams 


And his dreams

Become his delusions


Circles under his blue eyes

Haunting the sky


Circling to when I’m here

If I would 

If I would leave 


Hold me this tonight 


I won’t 

I’m floating away

Away 

Away 

I’m dissociating in reality


I’m the winner in his nightmares 

The loser in his fantasies 


Irony no longer with me

I’m right here

I’m not here

We will together

We  are together

We die together

We never 


Never understood 


I know

I care

I love


I fall 


The author's comments:

Hi! My name is Peyton Brown and I'm a senior in high school. I was inspired to make this poem about being a person rejecting someone who can't take no for answer. I used the analogy of the sun and the moon to reflect this. I want to, however, make this piece more introspective and personal to the reader. I have my own opinion on the subject of my piece, but you can too. 


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