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Athena

March 19, 2021
By 21sblusk BRONZE, Syracuse, New York
21sblusk BRONZE, Syracuse, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Yes, I am a communist and I consider it one of the greatest honours, because we are struggling for the total liberation of the human race." -Angela Davis


The World Stretches For Her.

the clouds scurry across the sky—

shrinking, so that She may rise


She moves strolling so,

as if the ground will move for Her;

it shakes in Her path.


She speaks light and airy,

disaster lacing Her words

while She takes the reins of Her world.


She soars to the sky—

—it purrs for Her,

Sun Fizzles.


She’s beauty

She’s grace

She Is The One-Man Race.


the sun rises for her—

a ticket to the sky.

Her fingers flirt with space.


The sky shatters for her.

It shatters itself.

Pieces upon pieces, it breaks.


blue flakes of falling fortress

mean nothing to her.

they sizzle under her dying sun—

they sizzle.

they sizzle, and burn, and sizzle

some more.


The World Shatters For Her.

Crumbles At Her Name, For

She Is Her Own Disaster—

a beauty and disgrace.

She rides the sun Her own way—

She, the world must face.


The author's comments:

The origins of this pem started off in a prompt for my Advanced Creative Writing Class - teacher had instructed us to write something mimicking America's Got Talent, though with a different suject. That's when I started cultivating this persona of someone who was beautiful and talented, but destructively so. From there, I went down a bit of a rabithole with the idea and started this poem exploring that 'persona' more. The hardest part about writing this poem was the title - it had originally been "She Rode The Sun," though I felt that it didn't really give the poem justice, and eventually settled on Athena. That being said, the main point wasn't for readers to envision a particular person or charachter when reading this poem, but to imagine someone in their own life and/or expirience who fits into this poem. 

I hope when people read this poem they get a sense of what beauty can be. It can be an innocent flower, or a wildly destructive force. Beauty is an intricate concept not fully formed - tere isn't just one standard for it, so why should anyone contain themseleves or the things they see around them to that one definition? Beauty is everwhere, even in disasters - hurricanes, tsunamis, rebels, etc. Beauty is not one concrete thing, but rather a fluid understanding of how we pereceive things. Beauty is not something to be gate-kept, it's something to be explored and evolved through writing and understanding.


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