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Your Eyes MAG

By Elisha L., Canton, OH

      I sat for days

struggling to pinpoint the

perfect word to describe

your brown eyes

When today I realized

they’re blue.



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i love this so much!

on Apr. 1 2014 at 4:28 pm
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Writers aren't exactly one person, they're a whole bunch of people trying to be one person"

haha didn't mean to write funny twice...

on Apr. 1 2014 at 4:28 pm
LavanderMayday SILVER, Oroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Writers aren't exactly one person, they're a whole bunch of people trying to be one person"

A funny, quirky, unique, funny poem! :) I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work :) Happy Writing! -Jofie (=^.^=)

on Feb. 23 2013 at 1:21 pm
BlueSupernova ELITE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Damn it, Ted!"

this is a very beautiful poem. :) good job, you are a very good poet.

on Jun. 22 2012 at 12:08 pm
VivaciousWriter1 GOLD, Highland Park, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
I'm beautiful in my way, 'cuz God makes no mistakes/I'm on the right track, baby, I was born this way!" ~Lady Gaga, "Born This Way"

This is probably my favorite poem currently :) Me and my friend wrote something like this a few years ago haha

irishlass317 said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 7:55 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

I love this!! Soooooooo adorable!!! :D

randomness said...
on Nov. 22 2008 at 8:47 am
Hey this reminds me of Your Song by Elton John but wow it's a cool poem.

Tweedle Dee said...
on Oct. 27 2008 at 1:27 pm
ha ha that's funny and kinda sad because lots of people think they're in love and dont even know anything about the other person. keep writting, i've read all your poems and they all rock!