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If You Could See, If You Could Hear

November 9, 2020
By dangct22 BRONZE, York, Pennsylvania
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"All that glitters is not gold" - William Shakespeare

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Thoughts spiraling vigorously

Inside the mind

Thoughts running madly

Screaming erupt inside

Entangled intricately - confusion forms

Thoughts dancing

Around and around 

Around and around

Dancing thoughts

Forms confusion - intricately entangled

Inside erupt screaming

Madly running thoughts

Mind the inside

Vigorously spiraling thoughts

© Yukun Z., Toronto, ON, Canada

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This piece talks about how the thoughts appear in the mind of someone who is distressed.

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