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Ocean Tide Blue

November 12, 2019
By Anonymous

    Seeing the tall beautiful palm trees as I’m driving to beverly hills is fascinating.

As I'm walking down to the beach, I can already see the beauty of the blue ocean.

    The feeling of the scorching hot sand burns my toes off.

When my brother jumps into the water and SPLASHES* me with cold  salty water he makes me furious.

    When it’s 100 degrees at the beach and the sun is screaming; you feel like you are burning inside an oven.

Don’t you get mad when your younger sibling splashes you with cold water over

    and over

           and over-

                 Well I for sure do. 


The author's comments:

This piece is a free-verse poem that I made during class. Everything that occurs in this poem did happen.This poem is about when I first went to the beach for the very first time.


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