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The Unaccomplished Poet

September 4, 2019
By HaileyH BRONZE, Beijing, Other
HaileyH BRONZE, Beijing, Other
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The paradox crushed my head between impossibilities

And a peak into eternity, the instant I chose I was bursting

With dreams. Then, swallowing the emetic of reality,

I fidget out the incompetence stuck up my throat, slamming

 

A single verse feebly into the frame of that elaborate door

Closed on me forevermore—the entrance fee is guts and gore!

Cheap rhymes, they are, but what is art if he pries

At his own creation, clawing desire into dust? Catch—

 

A pitiful fool, catch—

A twenty two, catch—

A metaphor of mathematical tool, catch—

 

The unaccomplished poet sitting on a stool, catch—

A death wish and put it in a frame, catch—

A life and put it on a line, break—

 

The line and set me free.


The author's comments:

My favorite part of the poem is how uncomfortable it is to look at. The "break" deliberately breaks the repetition of "catch," and the last line breaks the poem and prevents it from becoming a sonnet. This is how "the unaccomplished poet" acknowledges and expresses his discomfort with his incompetence. 

I am a high school student in Beijing with a passion for poetry and journalism. My other work has been published on Inkbeat Literary Journal, and I was a round three finalist for the 2019 New York Times editorial contest. To me, writing means experimenting with myself and my thoughts.


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on Sep. 12 2019 at 6:58 pm
PoetFromAnotherPlanet GOLD, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion; it is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from these things." -T.S. Eliot

Wow, I really enjoyed this! Made me think.