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Earth's Heaven

March 26, 2019
By ajm02 BRONZE, Scarsdale, New York
ajm02 BRONZE, Scarsdale, New York
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Comradery.

Compassion.

Courage.


Scaling the trails as the heavens cry;

I hear the booming voice of the almighty;

He challenges me to follow, but urges me to stay.


      We wait . . .


Hiding from his wrath in the lush forest;

awaiting Zeus’ change of heart;

As his tirade fades, we forge ahead;

We inch towards our pinnacle;

Carrying the world on our backs with goal in sight;

Breaking through the clouds themselves.


      I’m overcome by awe . . .


I see all; The currents of the Universe being circulated through me;

At the merging of heaven and earth, I see the world through the eyes of an angel;

The whole world seemed to be at my fingertips, Standing 1400 feet high;

Looking over the edge, my fear was nonexistent;

In the comforting embrace of mother nature;

I am at peace.


The author's comments:

This year in English class I was assigned a project to create a representation of a transcendental event I lived through.  I wrote a poem depicting an Outward Bound backpacking and canoeing trip I experienced.  This trip was such a physically and socialy difficult time, but after adgusting, I had some of the most awakening moments of my life.  In my poem, I write about one memorable day of my two week journey that was especially amazing: hiking up mountains with 60 lbs on my back, braving a brutal thunder storm, and actually walking through clouds as the highlight.  My teacher, my classmates, and my uncle, who is a college English professor, were all shocked I could write a poem this vivid.  They all gave me the best responses I’d ever received on a piece of writing. 


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