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Outside a Bottle

January 9, 2019
By ac0429 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
ac0429 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Ain't nothin' over, til' its over"



The hotel reveals itself to midnight 
The midnight sky, dark like the blood spilled on a goblet 
The hotel, like a neglected and moldy shack 
With kids playing hide and seek with no seeker 
 
Like a paper flowing with the wind 
With the alcoholics having their silver drinks 
And little kids sobbing for their dads 
 
Like an unexplored side of the moon 
Always dark like hotel rooms 
With the smells of burnt cigars and dreams 
Like a corridor going on and on with no end. 
 


The author's comments:

I wrote this piece to portary a dark hotel on a dark night. I really hope you like this poem and I do hope you accept  but if you don't, thank you for at least looking at my poem.


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