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Forgetting you

October 11, 2018
By Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
Moesah BRONZE, Santa Ana, California
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Forgetting you

Your bittersweet kisses

Make me forget

The worse is gone

When I am with you, I'm at my highest

When you’re gone I feel my lowest

Loving you will kill me yet,

I can’t stop

I know having you stay is a hidden sin

But I think of you every day

Your smile entices me

Your eyes invite me

Your laugh excites me

Your cries break me

Hurting you was not planned, but loving you was

I wish I could take it back

Feel your touch

But you are my past

And someone else’s future

You are not mine

And I need to forget you


The author's comments:

This piece was inspired by my broken heart... 


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12506372 said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 2:33 pm
12506372, Huntersville, North Carolina
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I really liked this poem, I liked how the emotions were expressed so clearly.

ch_ said...
on Dec. 13 2021 at 1:47 pm
ch_, Charlotte, North Carolina
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This was an amazing poem! I could feel your emotions through it.

on Dec. 7 2021 at 2:21 pm
PandaTori653609 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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Amazing poem! This was very emotional and deep but sooo good and intresting.

on Nov. 29 2021 at 9:11 pm
Kingpoet2806 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Her heart was an open book with beautiful pages and detailed lettering. She wanted people to read her story in hopes that it would make them write their own. Instead, every person who came across the pages of her heart ripped out their favorite story and took it with them. They folded back pages and bent up corners. They signed their name with sloppy writing and with a simple 'goodbye'. This book is now tucked away in the darkest parts of her, because no one wants to read a tragic story with a bad ending.

Beautiful! Inspiring.

Afra DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 11 2021 at 9:17 am
Afra DIAMOND, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You can’t ask other people to believe you and vote for you if you don’t back yourself."
-Jacinda Ardern-

"If I can make someone's day brighter, happier, better, that makes me happier."
-Ava Max-

"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

"A Bridge Has Two Sides."
-Elsa- (Fictional character- Frozen)

“I knew who I was as a girl but I had to find who I was as a woman.”
-Delta Goodrem-

Wow...This poem is lovely...I wanted to share my poem too...I hope you all would like it...It got published recently...http://url4857.TeenInk.com/ls/click?upn=Rg1qXhbB7thJkhVgbd11OV2YsYP-2BZqjqyziuUy0IjZH9sfu6gN5ERPfSe0HaWO-2FWDEcgtAIuGpacidd1eckhnA-3D-3DPR0B_T5fi2s9Uiy-2FzgxQfcwmp5DqoJBiAHlSTa55SUIrfp67lCEc3Fn6nqGwQoqjyRMhSHdZkB4ZdkQWEQAqnAt-2BeWdHgeDMzJguzNVPKfMZXyMl1e1O764qdf1QIVMg4wmFoX2mhE2eq0w787k-2FxmPx9KUvQrhlGhRGLw9ooZkYhUz8awO0VRG7qK-2FmOGSjef2NElcoji1VZxW0LSjP8r4NkZw-3D-3D

eve240042 GOLD said...
on Nov. 4 2021 at 10:48 am
eve240042 GOLD, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
Literally just be yourself. You are amazing and all anybody wants is for you to be yourself.

I was scrolling through the pages and pages of endless poems by named and unnamed people, growing tired of how many poems I had read, but none hit me quite like this one has. Very special poem we have here.

Series BRONZE said...
on Oct. 27 2021 at 6:03 pm
Series BRONZE, Wailuku, Hawaii
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Wow. I am at a loss for words. I wanna describe how exactly your poem has touched me inside, I feel so connected to your poem. And the loudest applause in your audience comes from me, I assure you. Excellent work my friend. 🖤

on Oct. 13 2021 at 10:25 pm
francezfeelz BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons, you say "it is what it is" and move on - Jake Duncan (a best friend who I won't forget and I can't wait to reconnect with so if you're out there I hope you're ok <3 ily)

I saw when this poem just got published and it's so great seeing it up here 3 yrs later!!!!!!!!!! I didn't get it back then but right now with the break up I'm going through this it's < just leaving me speechless- kinda art that makes you sigh <3

on Sep. 16 2021 at 12:03 pm
oliviaphillips4397, Nmb, South Carolina
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I feel so much the same way becaus ei am in foster care and i miss my family so much

Mojo said...
on Sep. 13 2021 at 12:38 pm
Mojo, Chandler, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Toss my pain with my wishes in a wishing well-Juice wrld

I find appeal to this, the idea of expressing heartbreak entices me so but the idea of admitting fault and flaw entices me even more, far more than simply saying one had there heart broken, but you actually admitted your fault of the matter and the remorse to come. Good show I say.

on Sep. 8 2021 at 10:35 am
-Classic_Crown-, Palmetto Palms, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't a fantasy, but your mind is.

It's very great and it lights something in my heart.

on May. 13 2021 at 12:54 pm
Kristianya BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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This is beautiful and unique

CalderDS24 said...
on May. 13 2021 at 11:30 am
CalderDS24, Woodbridge, Virginia
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This is so beautiful. So many strong emotions in short simple words.

on May. 8 2021 at 8:48 pm
violetmoonlitrose BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
If I ever opened my eyes, would I be waking up in a different reality? -Violet Evergarden

I feel this with a passion, someone you cannot have, yet you yearn and cry for them, and knowing it was a sin yet you still committed it, for the sake of the feelings you had for that person till it was time to rid them.

on Apr. 9 2021 at 1:06 pm
coffeeaddict-05 PLATINUM, Woodland Park, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Don't compare yourself to others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon, they both shine when the time is right.

this beautiful poem really spoke to me, your talent is dripping from your fingers!

on Apr. 5 2021 at 2:03 am
CJ-The-Tall-Poet PLATINUM, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you want to date people, go to college. If you want an education, go to the library. - Frank Zappa

Very Beautiful :)

Thatweirdkid said...
on Apr. 1 2021 at 10:22 am
Thatweirdkid, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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This is really good! The emotions journey the narrator went on is powerful and sweet. I has a really good message about letting go too.

aubreyvernon said...
on Apr. 1 2021 at 10:16 am
aubreyvernon, Grandville, Michigan
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This is so good!!

Nusaybah said...
on Mar. 30 2021 at 9:22 pm
Nusaybah, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Fear of a name only increases fear of the thing itself.”

it is good

on Mar. 12 2021 at 1:57 pm
nightofthe__mist, Peoria, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The people you lose are right next to you

I can feel your pain. i lost the person i loved most in this world due to some drunk guy car crashing in to him and he died over night. I feel your pain