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Isn't it Lovely

August 21, 2018
By hairdyeandammonia BRONZE, Weston, Florida
hairdyeandammonia BRONZE, Weston, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't fall asleep yet / Contrary to popular belief, that's not where dreams get accomplished."


I think if that you were to trace all our paths with a ballpoint pen

Following the way we go

Where we’re put and

where we take ourselves,

(Plus all the times our paths cross with one another, if only for a breath,)

I think your paper would be completely black

Sort of shiny

And reeking of squid.


So, you know, maybe don’t do all of us

But still:

Pick out a handful of people and you’ll end up drawing tangles

Squiggles intertwined into a permanent knot,

Together till the sun blows up.

Because she’s a friend of a friend

And I passed by you in Publix six years ago

And your soccer coach’s brother’s wife’s friend’s ex-husband’s cousin’s former lab partner’s sister was the chief software engineer for your neighbor’s favorite app.

We are each other, I think

Maybe not always

Maybe not forever and ever

But at least right now

And isn’t it lovely?


The author's comments:

I'm fairly certain that I wrote this after reading Paper Towns by John Green, or at least the part about Q's fevered analysis of Song of Myself. Needless to say, I was kind in kind of an obsessive mood, thinking the most about the whole connectivity Thing and the use of "us" as a broad and wildly complex term. So is this pretentious? Probably. Is it wrong to recognize a fault and do nothing to fix it? Quite possibly. Are these questions annoying? Oh, for sure.


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