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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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twilightfanalice said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:51 pm
yeah,y???????????????? lol!!!!!!!
ppppppppppppeeeeaaaaacccceeeeee!
NathanMedina BRONZE said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 1:55 pm
well written
alice said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:59 am
jerk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alice said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:55 am
ikr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ALICE said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:53 am
TO, WOULD YOU LIKE T.
IF YOU DON'T HAVE ANYTHING NICE 2 SAY SHUT YOU FACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
alice said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:47 am
IKR REPLY BACK PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poetry_addict said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 11:35 am
love it as said before is super cuute
livsinthecity SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:26 am
wow a super cute poem...i can relate 2 it very well
keep jerking!!
SarahJumps SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:08 am
amazing- truly
princesspink said...
on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:26 am
i agree i think the use of the word "jerk" could have been delivered with more then just a punchline wit.
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
by the end I can only take the character you've created at face value when I want to see so much more of him.
I do love the use of the word in stanza two:
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
much more depth in meaning and metaphor.
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
by the end I can only take the character you've created at face value when I want to see so much more of him.
I do love the use of the word in stanza two:
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
much more depth in meaning and metaphor.
anythingandeverything GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 3:17 pm
haha, I think this is actually kind of hilarious!!! I love it!!!
snowglobevigilante said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:15 pm
Wow, that was a super cute poem! i love it! I think that many people can relate to this one! Good job1
polyprincess16 SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 4:47 pm
This was beautiful, and so true & very easy to connect with. Keep up the good work! Could you look at some of mine? ;)
buggzbunnie BRONZE said...
on Jun. 5 2010 at 11:47 am
awe this is cute
Candygirl18 said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:18 pm
I liked it,it was cute
ericers123 GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 2:27 pm
Cute!!
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