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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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shay10 said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 7:53 am
shay10, Taylor Michigan, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
ihsz yhu mad.?

omq i freakinnqq love this poem i feel the same exact way.!

on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:37 pm
buggzbunnie BRONZE, Middle River, Maryland
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i love it and the rythm only makes it so much better even though its alredy great .

RoxyO BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 3:36 pm
RoxyO BRONZE, Santa Fe, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes too short enjoy as much as you can...

I really like this poem it kinda makes me think about my realitionship lol

whatever25 said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 7:52 am
I dont get it

smith said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 10:10 pm
wow! this is beautiful, good writing

on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:08 pm
Mz.Minny2011 SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
My fav quote (4now)<br /> When I met you my heart skipped a beat..... the sun became the moon &amp; cold became heat.... Roses weren&#039;t red an violetes weren&#039;t blue.....And all because i fell IN LIKE WITH YOU &lt;3

THIS POEM IZ VERY KOOL. LUV IT

on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:01 pm
BarefootInTheWoods SILVER, New Salisbury, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Demon Pox!&quot; ~Will Herondale

Amen! I'm totally in love with a jerk.

on Mar. 29 2011 at 7:43 pm
midnitewanderer GOLD, West Des Moines, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t let what you can&#039;t do stop you from doing what you can do.<br /> John Wooden<br /> The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow this poem speaks the TRUTH!! love the last stanza! "a yet you're the best jerk i see" =) Also the flowing is good. GReat Poem!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 3:17 pm
Jennifer_Krasinski BRONZE, Decatur, Georgia
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love hurts if you do it right; you can cry when you get older.

My exboyfriend is perfectly described in this poem. I love it:) keep writing!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:11 pm
Faerie-Dreams BRONZE, Sheffield, Other
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you don&#039;t stand for something, you&#039;ll fall for anything-Wiseman in Sucker Punch

I'm also going through this right now, I was in a relationship with this guy who I absolutley adored. He was my first real love. It's over now, I was heartbroken when he ended it. It was earlier on this year and I'm with someone else now but I still think about him and I love it when he is around

on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:07 pm
I'm going through this right now and this means alot to me

rae_bae GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 12:06 pm
rae_bae GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
13 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life is short. Break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably! And never regret anything that made you smile...&quot;

(: Makes me feel good that I'm not the only one who falls in love with the jerk... 

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:33 am
Shayball SILVER, Gooding, Idaho
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the rest of the world wondering how the hell you did it.

 Really cute. :)

on Mar. 29 2011 at 9:08 am
Shelbslee SILVER, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
You never really understand a person, until you consider things from their point of view; until you climb into their skin and walk around in it.&quot;<br /> -Atticus Finch from To Kill A Mockingbird

I just went through this, and i loved it. It made me feel so not alone, I loved, but I also hate that it is so so true.

IM SO SEXY said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:05 am

this is awsome i love this

 


yourmoamama said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:03 am
this is so nice i was balling my eyes out

wrthh said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 8:03 am
this was nice i almost cried

on Mar. 29 2011 at 6:23 am
lonleywriter SILVER, Coram, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist.&quot;

So amazing! I fell in love with it, and I can absolutely relate to it. Great job :D

on Mar. 28 2011 at 1:28 pm
BeccaLeigh13 BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Live life to the fullest&quot;

I really love this poem. I can totally relate to this and i think a lot of other people could to. Great job.

on Mar. 25 2011 at 1:18 pm
fragileblackorchid SILVER, Houston, Texas
7 articles 82 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
People want to know why I do this, why I write such gross stuff. I like to tell them I have the heart of a small boy... and I keep it in a jar on my desk. <br /> -Stephen King :P<br /> The trust of the innocent is the liar&#039;s most useful tool. <br /> -Stephen King<br /> Now that we&#039;re here, <br /> It&#039;s so far away <br /> All the struggle we thought was in vain <br /> All the mistakes, <br /> One life contained <br /> They all finally start to go away <br /> Now that we&#039;re here its so far away <br /> And I feel like I can face the day <br /> I can forgive and I&rsquo;m not ashamed to be the person that I am today

ok i am a bit...creeped out because the guy i have hopelessly fallen for is such a jerk, he dumped me and asked for me back and my dumb self came back lolz wow you like wrote my life haha, and he has brown eyes and brown hair gr