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The Storm

June 26, 2014
By DaytonMulry GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
DaytonMulry GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
14 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
You win some. You lose some.


The cool, salty breeze
blew over the hill.
Men were fighting a war
against their own will.

They were sneaky and silent.
They enemy was violent.
Their tactics were the best.
They were better than the rest.

But all of a sudden;
Without any warning;
The clear sky faded.
And it started forming.

A massive tornado;
as large as a tower.
With its speed;
It had tremendous power.

The lightning struck.
So thin;
So tall;
That is what ended it all.


The author's comments:
I had typed this poem for class and my teacher asked if I had actually written this. After I had told her that I did write this; she said I needed to publish it on this website.

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on Jul. 20 2014 at 12:35 am
DaytonMulry GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
14 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
You win some. You lose some.

Thanks I love peotry sooo much and I'm glad you and a lot of people like it.

on Jul. 6 2014 at 3:15 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Stand up for what you believe in even if it means standing alone. -Andy Biersack
Sometimes you gotta fall before you can fly. -Kellin Quinn
You made me hate my own reflection. -Sleeping With Sirens

I love how this is worded, it keeps my attention the entire time. Even though I was singing while reading it. :P