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Girl Unobserved

January 15, 2014
By sarahgage BRONZE, X, Colorado
sarahgage BRONZE, X, Colorado
4 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Walk with the dreamers, the believers, the courageous, the cheerful, the planners, the doers, the successful people with their heads in the clouds and their feet on the ground." - Wilferd Peterson


Girl unobserved,
Comforted by the grace of the written word
Come alive off a page;
A thousand magical worlds
Begging to take her hands.

Girl unobserved,
Building her castles of glass,
A stone throw away from destruction,
From shattering into millions of irreparable pieces
Threatening to cause more pain

Girl unobserved,
Her freckled face
And imaginary state of mind,
Setting a stage for her ethereal dreams;
Her arm reaching for the stars and all that lies beyond

Girl unobserved,
Under the weight of the world,
Feeling a constant stare like that of Dr. Eckleburg;
Quick to judge her every move
And extinguish her bright flame

Girl unobserved,
Midway through her journey of life,
Searching for her path to take;
Wary and daunted
That she may never find the simpler pleasures of existence.

Girl unobserved,
Her life steady like clockwork,
Searching for a way to escape
This dark abyss of regularity
Wishing to seek her great perhaps

Girl unobserved,
A heart of steel,
Thrown hurdles day by day,
Continues to run towards
Her never disappearing green light



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on Jan. 22 2014 at 6:50 pm
booklover303 SILVER, Morgan Hill,
8 articles 5 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"School days are the unhappiest in the whole span of human existence. They are full of dull, unintelligible tasks, new and unpleasant ordinances, with brutal violations of common sense and common decency." -Henry Louis Mencken

nice! it's really well written!

on Jan. 19 2014 at 11:22 pm
onegirlandapen PLATINUM, Madera, California
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Favorite Quote:
"For I know the plans I have for you declares the Lord. Plans to prosper you and not to harm you. Plans to give you hope and a future." Jeremiah 29:11

i liked this sarah, it was very deep and meaningful. Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 19 2014 at 12:02 pm
sarahgage BRONZE, X, Colorado
4 articles 2 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Walk with the dreamers, the believers, the courageous, the cheerful, the planners, the doers, the successful people with their heads in the clouds and their feet on the ground." - Wilferd Peterson

Wow, thank you so so much!! :)

on Jan. 19 2014 at 2:12 am
LordHelen SILVER, Lompoc, California
9 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is the time you will never get back and tomorrow is the next yesterday."

Wow. Girl Unobserved is actually a good poem. I myself hate any poetry except those in the Dr. Seuss category, but I definitely would not mind readinf this again. Moreover, I would read it again. This is real. This is something I understand, something I think applies to real life. I understand this poetry, so I do like it. I just wish I could understand other poetry, that it would speak to me like this. This is...great.