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This strange little feeling

April 16, 2010

I'm falling again,
That I can't conceal,
I just can't explain,
These feelings I feel.

They build up inside me,
A strange kinda power,
The kind you can't see,
But inside it devours.

And when I see you,
It explodes full force,
I don't know what to do,
But I know you're the source.

I'm going to name this feeling I own,
With a name that shines above,
Not a detail to be condoned,
i think I'll call it love.



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on May. 14 2010 at 4:51 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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Thanks soo much! I will indeed. thanks for the compliment ! xD  

on May. 14 2010 at 4:20 pm
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

This is just amazing! Absolutely loved it! If you could can you look at my poems Memories and My First Love? If you can comment and rate them that would be great! You're very talented =D

on May. 12 2010 at 3:38 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
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you're very welcome (:

on May. 12 2010 at 3:37 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

No. Thank you. :)

on May. 11 2010 at 9:27 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments
Thanks soo much! I will most defiantly comment on your stuff! "  a writer of your caliber" ahah thanks !! xD  

on May. 10 2010 at 5:41 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

I love it! Its amazing and easy to relate to! Keep on writing. I would love for you to rate and comment on some of my writings. Please? That would be amazing if a writer of your caliber did that. Thanks and keep writing! :)

on May. 9 2010 at 7:59 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

Thanks sooo much ! I wrote it hoping people could relate ! it's alot of honesty (: 

Thanks again ! xD & i will comment & keep writing , thanks ! (: 


on May. 9 2010 at 5:22 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

aahhh i love it!! :) this is sooo great! it's cute and really honest. i can relate :) awesome job!! would you mind commenting on some of my work please? thanks and keep writing!! :)

on May. 6 2010 at 5:30 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

THANKS SO MUCH ! 

love you <3 ;D 


Kristen M. said...
on May. 6 2010 at 5:29 pm

YOU'RE SOOO GOOOOD (:

love it. <3


on May. 6 2010 at 2:11 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

Thanks sooo much ! :)

you are amazing ;D


k.james SILVER said...
on May. 6 2010 at 2:01 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

AMAZING!!!! AS ALWAYS, SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL :)