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A Girls Mental Abuse

April 4, 2009
By Free_spirit BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
Free_spirit BRONZE, Fort Myers, Florida
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I know a girl, shes been through alot. Maybe you havnt noticed or maybe you've just forgot. I know you've been hurt, that I can tell. Then again you dont have to got to her and yell. She cries all day and cries all night, and in her heart shes putting up a fight. A dager in one hand a pistol in the other, fighting off your mental abuse, SLASH! she gives another.
You've died. Well at least in her mind...
I know a girl, shes been through alot, her problem is solved, and she wont give it another thought.

The author's comments:

I have a friend,She hurt a guy and he made her feel terrible about it, so terrible that she cried every day after school.so i decided to write this poem inspired by them.

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on Nov. 12 2011 at 4:59 pm
SilentVoice BRONZE, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.
~ Unknown ~

I luv the way you describe this girl while still making it sound amazing.