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That's How It Was

March 14, 2018
By pastelstar27 BRONZE, Plainfield, Illinois
pastelstar27 BRONZE, Plainfield, Illinois
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Dry and sharp Desolate and Dangerous

Like the work of an evil child

Unwanted in this land

Friendly as the bad lands

The grieving skies

Turned what little water we had left to a dangerous metal

Hundreds of miles over of burn and flash with all manner of colored fires

And yet it gets very cold 

Month after month after month I lay my hate and grudge against this bewildering land

 

 

He's afraid of this place, further that so was I 

Running to get away from the unearthly landscape

Forgive your little faults and foibles

This new place drew in the stranger's admiration 

 

 

She was hungry to talk, and full of talk 

Far from being frightful

As beautiful as the clarity of light

A very explosion of dazzling jewels

The starlight a silver glow in the sky

The ravines lost their burned and dreadful look 

Crackle of branches friendlier than day

Trapped in color, trapped by the strange landscape which shouted with color

One cannot make the words too strong 


The author's comments:

This was a found poem, using pieces from John Steinbeck's "Travels with Charlie" and Mark Twain's "Weather of New England" 

This poem follows the story of my origonal characters Demeanor and Nefarious from my world called Eldoon. They came from a place much like the underworld, which is described with the start of the poem. They are assigned to do a project on earth, which they find to be a beautiful place with so many possibilitys that couldn't have even been thought of back in their home world. They befriend a girl named Fish and she shows them around Eldoon- which for the most part is very earth like, without technology. 

From this poem, I hope people see no matter where you are, whatever your doing, no matter your past, no matter how terrible, you can always find a way to change it, and become whom ever you wish to be. 


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