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I don't Care...

April 3, 2009
By bubblylittledancer PLATINUM, Waterloo, Iowa
bubblylittledancer PLATINUM, Waterloo, Iowa
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The cruelty of three little words,
You keep your head high,
It doesn't matter...

The harshness they can't see,
Ripping everything apart,
I don't care...

Rain pours down,
Broken, waiting,
But who is stronger?

The author's comments:
I don't care are the three worst words ever.

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AnneW SILVER said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 8:47 am
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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I have read through a good number of your poems and wow you are fabulous writer!

This is the one (so far!) that I like the best. It has strong feelings portrayed through your strong words and the subtle imagery at the end balances it out and finishes it off. Nice work!