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Can I be saved?

March 20, 2009
By Lenaforver PLATINUM, Highland, New York
Lenaforver PLATINUM, Highland, New York
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I was bullied
I was tortuted
I was miserable

It was inoccent at first
then she got mean.
She didn't see what she was doing to me.
How every word cut me more and more.
No one could see the bleeding.

I had no friends, this girl made it immposiable too have friends.
I was lonely and no one could help the pain.
I didn't understand, why was she picking on me?
I didn't have a an answer.
The pain cut at me, swipeing away at my self-esteem.
I had finally got to the point where I couldn't stand this pain.
I slit my wrist, and wacthed the red flow.
It was about two minutes later, when my mother walked in.

She might have saved me
but could anyone save me from the words?

The author's comments:
I based this story on a kid named Ryan. His father talked to our school about suicide and it really inspired me.

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on Apr. 3 2009 at 2:29 am
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
53 articles 1 photo 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

I don't know what else to say, i thought it was beutifully written and a really powerful piece of writting. it shows the message clearly, and inspires readers. great work!