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Oh my life

May 11, 2017
By Anonymous

Oh my life
Oh my life 
How I used 
To appreciate it,

Oh my life
Then came a
Bus and whoosh
I felt unappreciated 

Oh my life
It came like
LIGHTNING
And it was
Very dis-liking. 

Oh my life
Hitting me on
My thigh thump
And it made me fly

Oh my life
As I was 
In the sky
Everything
Seemed to die.


The author's comments:

My poem "Oh my life" is about how some friends come and go. As it says in stanza two, "Then came a bus and whoosh I felt unappreciated" really mean how "a bus" passed by not knowing they hurt someone and made them feel unappreciated. It happened really fast like how lightning strikes in a blink of an eye. The way we hurt shows how you feel like you just want to leave and "fly".  Also how everything looks like they'll last, but the never do so they just fade away. So the reason I did lightning in a different font and all capital was for it to stand out because it shows how fast everything just leaves like lightning. So those were my reasons for my poem.


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