TIMES UP! | Teen Ink


March 2, 2009
By kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
kissingdawn331 SILVER, Palatine, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when your hourglass runs out of sand you can't flip it over and start again."(changes weekly so check next weeks l8er)

Slowly slipping
sudden dripping
it's gone, It's gone, it's gone.
how could we be so wrong?
We rush around to defeat
This strong warrior is never beat.
Like a silent killer in the night
it slips over you like a shadow,
you're out of sight.
you think that you're immortal,
but i know you're wrong.
You can keep running,
but this moment is
dead and

The author's comments:
it's my view on how people view time it's more fragile than we know

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_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:03 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle
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-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Loved it, it is very deep and i love the message 5/5. keep writing.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

on Nov. 6 2009 at 7:57 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

I agree with LaurenHaley(=, your poems are really good but small. :D and they have meaning all over them! i love your work!!! :D

on Aug. 15 2009 at 8:43 pm
lauren,the,writer,and,photographer. GOLD, Vidor, Texas
19 articles 28 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand Up For What You Believe In; Even If Your Standing Alone.

Life isn't about finding yourself, its about creating your self.

When you say i do; that means i do you and you do me; and we do NObody else.
-Devin Wyman #72,NFLpatriots

gooood gweaf! you write such small poems, but the mean so mucccch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on May. 18 2009 at 12:34 pm
asiangurl... GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
15 articles 0 photos 10 comments
that was quite nice...i absolutly adore it!nice job:-)

on Mar. 18 2009 at 11:37 pm
sillyxgoose BRONZE, Bellflower, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
This was written very well. Its really deep and meaningful. I love it. :) Good job.