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A BLISSFUL ABODE

June 3, 2016
By arushimathur BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
arushimathur BRONZE, New Delhi, Other
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I walk down a valley

Where streams make a sally.
I hear the birds singing
And I see flowers springing

Cool breeze blows,
Little leaves with it flow
As I look up at the blue sky,
I feel so good, don’t know why!

All unpleasant things seem to be gone
It feels, as I move on.
I see people at play
They are all merry and say-
“Oh! How happy we are.
Tension and despair seem so far!”

Nobody is a stranger there
For, it is a place where
Everyone is a member of a family which is huge
And no one is a scrooge.

It is so lively and green
A place you would never have seen.
There’s not a tear in anyone’s eyes
Nor an evil man in disguise.

A place where everyone cares
A place where everyone shares
A place where your smile can never fade away…

This place, I realized
As I opened my eyes,
Was nothing, but a dream.

A dream, that taught me
A better person I should be
To change the world for everyone to see

To do so, I shall need you all
For if we all come together
We will never fall.

To make this dream come true
Is what I desire
And to make it more beautiful
Is what I aspire.            


The author's comments:

what inspired me to write this poem is the idea of a better, cheerful and pleasant world. it is just a thought, of a happier place, wihout the selfish, greedy, hostile, uncaring and materialistic nature of individuals. In order to accomplish all that, it is important for us to introspect ourselves and imbibe good values. this verse also highlights the beauty of nature which can only be achieved if we work together, for a better tomorrow.


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Anubhav N. said...
on Jun. 11 2016 at 1:19 pm
I wish the real world is this pretty as well...I have a dream! It will be this kinda world we will be living in some day. Oh! And amazing poem :) Very few people adopt such positive style of poetry and your work is just commendable and rare.

Anubhav N. said...
on Jun. 11 2016 at 1:19 pm
I wish the real world is this pretty as well...I have a dream! It will be this kinda world we will be living in some day. Oh! And amazing poem :) Very few people adopt such positive style of poetry and your work is just commendable and rare.

Kanav said...
on Jun. 11 2016 at 11:09 am
Your work is really good.

Kanav said...
on Jun. 11 2016 at 11:09 am
Your work is really good.

Devansh said...
on Jun. 11 2016 at 10:43 am
This is really good !! Keep it up !! Waiting for more