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The Apparition

May 4, 2016
By Treasure2002 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
Treasure2002 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Success is not final, failure is not fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> Winston Churchill


She comes and goes like a ghost

No interaction we share as guest and host

One minute, I'm living in total bliss

Another, my surroundings seem totally amiss

Then suddenly I'm charging headlong into a frenzy of insanity

That causes nothing for me but calamity

And rids and strips me of my humanity

The Apparition

 

Its been said by everyone that I'd turned crazy 

Everyone believed it Mark, Ivy and even Daisy

Before me I know not what I face

Life and death is now a race

Draining showers of different thoughts racing through my brain 

My heart feels like it's pouring rain 

Look at me my life is going down the drain

The Apparition

 

Everything is popping in my head

I don't know if I'm alive or dead

Deceased soul appearing in body

Makes you wonder if you are somebody

I'll just cease to fight 

This spirit with all my might

And live my life to the fullest despite

The Apparition


The author's comments:

The poem is written in the point of view of someone who sees ghost and we see how the person fights to understand what's happening. In the first stanza we get kind of a little background information on the person's experience. Whereas in the second stanza we go deeper into the emotions of the person and finally in the third stanza the person finally decides to live life no matter what's happening to him. The ghost in this poem is figurative and actually stands for the flaws that so many people struggle to deal with. We need to learn to live with our flaws and learn to control it rather than fight it. This is the message I'm hoping to pass on to my audience.


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on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
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Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.

Camilla said...
on May. 13 2016 at 7:45 pm
Your work is amazing and I am so proud of you. You have come a long way from the little girl who was always reading and writing books you hoped would get published one day. You are an wonderful writer and I know you are going places with your talent.