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*BILLIE*

February 18, 2009
By NovelistJoshF. SILVER, Erin, Tennessee
NovelistJoshF. SILVER, Erin, Tennessee
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Eyes like the ocean before a tide,
Hair as silky smooth as a dog's coast,
Skin as soft and light as a stream,
lips longing for that touch of true love,
personality sweet like chocolate and spunky with a little salt & pepper to add spice,
body short and waiting for the last modifications to take place.
HER
She id my long waited friend, best friend to cheer everyone on, to hold and love, the moment I notice her I fall or trip because her beauty knocks me out, when she talks I always listen whether I'm talking or not,
She walks the slowest steps possible, but it s because she wants to see her life till the end.
Every time I try to breathe around her I don't have any breath left to breathe
If I say something to her its quick and painless just like a band-aid.

My passion is for her and her only

Billie



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drmeadow said...
on Mar. 30 2009 at 4:09 pm
intriguing!

good descriptive language!

on Mar. 16 2009 at 7:52 pm
artofthedeath PLATINUM, Dothan, Alabama
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This is a thoughtful peice of writing.

I thought it was very well pronounced. You have good things coming to you. :)