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Our Senses Together

February 21, 2009
By katie24 SILVER, Lebanon, Indiana
katie24 SILVER, Lebanon, Indiana
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I can feel his blood running through his veins
I can hear his heart beat in unison with mine
I can smell his scent together with mine
I can taste the cinnamon from his toast
I can see the amusement in his eyes

He is feeling my soft back
He is hearing the noises I make
He is smelling the scent we make
He is tasting the enjoyment of me
He is seeing the pleasure in me

We feel each other
We hear each other
We smell each other
We taste each other
We see each other

All like no one has before

The author's comments:
this is just something that i kept rewriting over and over agian until i got the way i like it

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