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Life At Its Purest

January 17, 2016
By TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
20 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
I got a ton of work to do. A SKELEton.
I need to put a little more BackBONE into it.
I deserve PUNishment.
Nyeh heh heh!


The gates await the golden petals,
The earth below, covered with metals.

Blossoms glide in the sky,
As the white powder slowly dies.

The beautiful sound of singing,
The air filled with ringing.

Fish swim against the current of force,
Its free and kind, the beauty of a horse.

The children sit in the green branches,
the leaves listens as the grass dances.

When darkness falls,
The shadows call.

The black sky eats away all of existence.
The darkness consumes the distance.

The grey alley cats roam the city,
carrying a face filled with wit

The perfect time to think about
how life is just a sprout
and how people can’t doubt
what lets us out.


The author's comments:

Well, my class was having a contest for poem writing. Whoever participated would get extra credit. I wanted to write something beautiful, so I stuck with a nature theme. Well anyways, enjoy this masterpiece if you want, peace out!


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on Feb. 23 2019 at 12:06 am
not_very_important BRONZE, Waco, Texas
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"Be without fear in the face of your enemies. Be brave and upright, so that God may love thee. Speak the truth always, even if it leads to your death. Safeguard the helpless and do no wrong; that is your oath."

This was cool.

on Mar. 21 2016 at 7:25 am
TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
20 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
I got a ton of work to do. A SKELEton.
I need to put a little more BackBONE into it.
I deserve PUNishment.
Nyeh heh heh!

@kosmokitty Oh, I guess I didn't win :( My teacher told me that if I didn't get an email yet, then I wasn't chosen.

on Mar. 19 2016 at 10:45 pm
Mimirockzzz BRONZE, Kelowna, Other
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
i like a lot.

on Mar. 9 2016 at 11:17 am
TikiTobi PLATINUM, Traverse City, Michigan
20 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
I got a ton of work to do. A SKELEton.
I need to put a little more BackBONE into it.
I deserve PUNishment.
Nyeh heh heh!

Idk yet. Im still waiting for a reply back from the judges.

on Mar. 8 2016 at 10:34 pm
kosmokitty BRONZE, ..., Colorado
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I'm all fired up now! ;)

Ooo This feels like beauty, mystery and a little sadness at the edge. Did you win? You're really good with poems :)